摘要:大家都知道:臨陣磨槍,不快也光。特別是針對(duì)于英語(yǔ)作文,考前背模板成了所有考生不約而同都要做的事。你背我也背,大家都在背,單單只
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摘要:大家都知道:臨陣磨槍,不快也光。特別是針對(duì)于英語(yǔ)作文,考前背模板成了所有考生不約而同都要做的事。你背我也背,大家都在背,單單只知道傻傻的背,真的有用嗎?
隨著2018考研時(shí)間的臨近,很多同學(xué)都已經(jīng)開(kāi)始把復(fù)習(xí)的精力轉(zhuǎn)移到比較容易得分的專項(xiàng)上,對(duì)于英語(yǔ)來(lái)說(shuō),最容易提分的部分仍然是寫(xiě)作部分。大部分同學(xué)都認(rèn)為只要考前背誦一些范文、模板就能考出不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù),但是事實(shí)并非如此。
很多同學(xué)閱讀過(guò)無(wú)數(shù)篇考研經(jīng)驗(yàn)帖子,有些學(xué)姐學(xué)長(zhǎng)告訴你考研英語(yǔ)作文套用模板就可以。但是大家在使用寫(xiě)作模板這個(gè)問(wèn)題上是存在很大的誤區(qū)的,經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)這樣那樣的問(wèn)題。
?套用模板的幾種常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤
易犯錯(cuò)誤一:模板中的句型套用不正確,不完整。
比如:我們?cè)跁?shū)信結(jié)尾的時(shí)候會(huì)說(shuō)I am looking forward to hearing from you. 而學(xué)生卻把這句話寫(xiě)成了I am looked forward to hear from you. 這種現(xiàn)象非常普遍,可見(jiàn),學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作態(tài)度并不是很端正,很認(rèn)真。
易犯錯(cuò)誤二:模板中的句型和實(shí)際寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容不匹配。
比如:有的圖畫(huà)作文第二段要求根據(jù)圖畫(huà)所表達(dá)的含義進(jìn)行深層次的論證,而學(xué)生套用的句型卻是第二段寫(xiě)對(duì)比的句型,顯然是沒(méi)有正確理解句型使用的語(yǔ)言背景。
再比如:小作文的摘要,是要根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)文章歸納出中心內(nèi)容進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作,這個(gè)一般都是客觀的描述,而學(xué)生卻用了一個(gè)寫(xiě)圖畫(huà)作文的模板,通篇都是"我"認(rèn)為,這如何又能得高分呢?
易犯錯(cuò)誤三:模板套用千篇一律,沒(méi)有新意。
再好的模板,如果所有的學(xué)生都是用也就變成了一張白紙,沒(méi)有任何亮點(diǎn)。而這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤也正是急功近利的學(xué)生容易犯的。
那么,英語(yǔ)作文模板到底可不可以用?
可以用。模板給我們預(yù)先規(guī)定好寫(xiě)作的框架,可以幫助我們很快構(gòu)思出每一段大致寫(xiě)什么內(nèi)容。再者,通過(guò)背誦模板,可以有效彌補(bǔ)我們的詞匯和句式多樣性的匱乏,從遣詞造句上迅速提升作文的水準(zhǔn)。
但是要注意方法,只靠通用的模板本身是很難在閱卷老師那里蒙混過(guò)關(guān)的,尤其是近年考研閱卷已經(jīng)十分重視"反模板化"。模板用的好會(huì)給你的作文"錦上添花",用的不好反而會(huì)暴露你真實(shí)的"蹩腳"英語(yǔ)水平。我們要通過(guò)自己的練習(xí),對(duì)模板不斷完善升級(jí),從而打造屬于自己的個(gè)性化模板。
?三步教你打造屬于自己的個(gè)性化模板
第一步:
要做到對(duì)自己所用模板的每個(gè)詞每句話意思清楚,以及空缺的部分應(yīng)該填補(bǔ)詞還是句子。
第二步:
利用模板仿寫(xiě)真題和模擬題,反復(fù)實(shí)踐。在實(shí)踐中反復(fù)熟悉模板的內(nèi)容以做到靈活的使用。在這個(gè)過(guò)程中,你寫(xiě)作的不足和障礙也會(huì)有效暴露出來(lái),記得要及時(shí)的"補(bǔ)救"。
而且大家可以根據(jù)你手上的模板中一些強(qiáng)烈模板句的開(kāi)頭或者連接句進(jìn)行自己的改造,同時(shí)在可以嘗試把多個(gè)模板糅合成一個(gè)你自己獨(dú)創(chuàng)的新的模板。
第三歩:
在此基礎(chǔ)之上,同學(xué)們還需要積累一些必要的寫(xiě)作素材,拓寬寫(xiě)作思路,這樣才能真正做到在考場(chǎng)上"得心應(yīng)手","言之有物"。
比如,大家可以在閱讀中學(xué)習(xí)寫(xiě)作,遇到使用范圍較廣的句子就可以記錄下來(lái),像環(huán)保類,法律類,道德品質(zhì)類等,一般適用性都比較強(qiáng)。當(dāng)然,隨著寫(xiě)作能力的上升也可以不再拘泥于模板。
?案例:結(jié)合真題分析如何使用模板
下面,我們結(jié)合一道非常具有代表性的真題來(lái)進(jìn)行作文模板的分析。這道題是2010年(英語(yǔ)一)大作文題目。
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
大家肯定對(duì)這道題十分熟悉。按照大作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的"內(nèi)容完整",我們需要將大作文寫(xiě)成3段話:第一段"描述圖畫(huà)";第二段"闡述寓意";第三段"個(gè)人評(píng)論"。這三個(gè)要求根本不用去記,因?yàn)轭}目當(dāng)中已經(jīng)有了。
第一段的段落思路:"直觀評(píng)價(jià)、整體描述、細(xì)節(jié)描述、過(guò)渡句"。
第一句我們只需要對(duì)這幅圖畫(huà)進(jìn)行直觀評(píng)價(jià)就可以了。可以寫(xiě)成What an interesting picture it is! 怎么記?只要記住這是一個(gè)感嘆句句式即可。
第二句記憶的時(shí)候,弄清楚前后兩個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。As is vividly depicted in the photo, a hot pot is boiling a lot of different things with much hot steam gushing, which successfully captures our eyes.
第三句可以寫(xiě)成After a close watch, it is not difficult to find that many kinds of culture have been mixed in the same small hot pot, symbolizing the exchange of many different kinds of culture from all over the world. 在記憶的時(shí)候,只需記住是"狀語(yǔ)+it形式主語(yǔ)句+主干"即可。
Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed deserves a further analysis. 這是最后一句,相信大家能立馬分清:這是主語(yǔ)從句。
接著看第二段。第二段的思路是:"關(guān)鍵句(總)、具體原因(分)、結(jié)果分析"。
例子:
Theoretically, the phenomenon presented by the drawing brings us both advantages and disadvantages. As for my part, the former outweighs its latter. On the top of list is that the same earth village could bring us much more commerce opportunities, which help the whole development of the world. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is no doubt that more friendly cooperation from different countries may promote the development of diplomatic relations between countries. No other case can better illustrate the phenomenon than the picture above.
其實(shí),第一句就是"主謂賓"的結(jié)構(gòu),后面的原因句子,"On the top of list is that..."是我們教大家的框架句子。"In addition, there is the other point that..."這樣的句式其實(shí)就是就是"There be +that從句"。
來(lái)看最后一段。段落思路是"關(guān)鍵句+具體建議+結(jié)尾句"。由于本題屬于"社會(huì)現(xiàn)象",所以可以寫(xiě)成以下段落。記憶這些句子時(shí),注意句式:it形式主語(yǔ)句式、倒裝句等。
According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to maximize its positive effects and minimize the disadvantages. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of the value of global communication between mass kinds of culture .
所以同學(xué)們?cè)跍?zhǔn)備考研英語(yǔ)作文時(shí)一定要把握住每個(gè)段落的思路,每個(gè)句式的特點(diǎn)。一定要弄清楚每個(gè)句子怎么構(gòu)成的,只有先理解句子的語(yǔ)法構(gòu)成,才能順利記住這些"神通廣大"的句子,并且將它們補(bǔ)齊寫(xiě)成自己特有的亮點(diǎn)句子。
?瞬間提升作文檔次的金句:
1.愛(ài)屋及烏 Love me, love my dog.
2.百聞不如一見(jiàn) Seeing is believing.
3.比上不足比下有余 worse off than some, better off than many; to fall short of the best, but be better than the worst.
4.笨鳥(niǎo)先飛 A slow sparrow should make an early start.
5.不眠之夜 white night
6.不以物喜不以己悲 not pleased by external gains, not saddened by personnal losses
7.不遺余力 spare no effort; go all out; do one's best
8.不打不成交 No discord, no concord.
9.拆東墻補(bǔ)西墻 rob Peter to pay Paul
10.辭舊迎新 bid farewell to the old and usher in the new; ring out the old year and ring in the new
11.大事化小小事化了 try first to make their mistake sound less serious and then to reduce it to nothing at all
12.大開(kāi)眼界 open one's eyes; broaden one's horizon; be an eye-opener
13.國(guó)泰民安 The country flourishes and people live in peace
14.過(guò)猶不及 going too far is as bad as not going far enough; beyond is as wrong as falling short; too much is as bad as too little
15.功夫不負(fù)有心人 Everything comes to him who waits.
16.好了傷疤忘了疼 once on shore, one prays no more
17.好事不出門(mén)惡事傳千里 Good news never goes beyond the gate, while bad news spread far and wide.
18.和氣生財(cái) Harmony brings wealth.
19.活到老學(xué)到老 One is never too old to learn.
20.既往不咎 let bygones be bygones
21.金無(wú)足赤人無(wú)完人 Gold can't be pure and man can't be perfect.
22.金玉滿堂 Treasures fill the home.
23.腳踏實(shí)地 be down-to-earth
24.腳踩兩只船 sit on the fence
25.君子之交淡如水 the friendship between gentlemen is as pure as crystal; a hedge between keeps friendship green
26.老生常談陳詞濫調(diào) cut and dried, cliché
27.禮尚往來(lái) Courtesy calls for reciprocity.
28.留得青山在不怕沒(méi)柴燒 Where there is life, there is hope.
29.馬到成功 achieve immediate victory; win instant success
30.名利雙收 gain in both fame and wealth
31.茅塞頓開(kāi) be suddenly enlightened
32.沒(méi)有規(guī)矩不成方圓 Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.
33.每逢佳節(jié)倍思親 On festive occasions more than ever one thinks of one's dear ones far away.It is on the festival occasions when one misses his dear most.
34.謀事在人成事在天 The planning lies with man, the outcome with Heaven. Man proposes, God disposes.
35.弄巧成拙 be too smart by half; Cunning outwits itself
36.拿手好戲 masterpiece
37.賠了夫人又折兵 throw good money after bad
38.拋磚引玉 a modest spur to induce others to come forward with valuable contributions; throw a sprat to catch a whale
39.破釜沉舟 cut off all means of retreat;burn one's own way of retreat and be determined to fight to the end
40.搶得先機(jī) take the preemptive opportunities
41.巧婦難為無(wú)米之炊 If you have no hand you can't make a fist. One can't make bricks without straw.
42.千里之行始于足下 a thousand-li journey begins with the first step-the highest eminence is to be gained step by step
43.前事不忘后事之師 Past experience, if not forgotten, is a guide for the future.
44.前人栽樹(shù)后人乘涼 One generation plants the trees in whose shade another generation rests.One sows and another reaps.
45.前怕狼后怕虎 fear the wolf in front and the tiger behind hesitate in doing something
46.強(qiáng)龍難壓地頭蛇 Even a dragon (from the outside) finds it hard to control a snake in its old haunt - Powerful outsiders can hardly afford to neglect local bullies.
47.強(qiáng)強(qiáng)聯(lián)手 win-win co-operation
48.瑞雪兆豐年 A timely snow promises a good harvest.
49.人之初性本善 Man's nature at birth is good.
50.人逢喜事精神爽 Joy puts heart into a man.
51.人海戰(zhàn)術(shù) huge-crowd strategy
52.世上無(wú)難事只要肯攀登 Where there is a will, there is a way.
53.世外桃源 a fictitious land of peace away from the turmoil of the world;
54.死而后已 until my heart stops beating
55.歲歲平安 Peace all year round.
56.上有天堂下有蘇杭 Just as there is paradise in heaven, ther are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth
57.塞翁失馬焉知非福 Misfortune may be an actual blessing.
58.三十而立 A man should be independent at the age of thirty.At thirty, a man should be able to think for himself.
59.升級(jí)換代 updating and upgrading (of products)
60.四十不惑 Life begins at forty.
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