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2016考研英語(yǔ):小作文預(yù)測(cè)之建議信

  【摘要】隨著2016考研英語(yǔ)大綱的發(fā)布,作文預(yù)測(cè)也進(jìn)入了如火如荼的階段。小作文方面很有可能會(huì)考到建議信,因此建議大家對(duì)于建議信多加關(guān)注。在此就建議信給大家一些備考策略。了解更多猛戳

  
  
  作文的提高除了積累語(yǔ)料素材之外,還要多多加以練習(xí),只有在練習(xí)中才能發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤以及段落安排上的問(wèn)題,還有自己到底是詞匯上還是句子上的欠缺。下邊是一篇關(guān)于建議信的習(xí)作,希望大家能夠從中有所收獲。

  Dear President,
  I am Liming,a college student of our university.I am writing this letter to submit some suggestions about the problems of our canteen which ①leads ②to so many students complain about.

  First of all,the distance between canteen and library is so far.It causes inconvenience for those who ③like study in library ④all one day.Second,food security in the build is very suspectable.People in ⑤many ⑥mount have always found ⑦fair and others in their ⑧foods when they were having a meal.Third,the ⑨sense of food is inedible and the price ⑩of one is expensive.

  All in all, I hope you will find my recommendations useful to improve life quality of students.Thank you for hearing my suggestions.
  Yours sincerely
  Liming
  備注:
  1、是問(wèn)題的定語(yǔ)從句,問(wèn)題是復(fù)數(shù),所以為lead,不加s

  2、導(dǎo)致lead to doing;lead sb. To do .所以這里改為lead many students to complain about.
  3、Like to study 想要學(xué)習(xí)在圖書(shū)館;like studying 喜歡在圖書(shū)館學(xué)習(xí)

  4、一整天,all day long

  5、把many 改為certain更合適一些

  6、數(shù)量amount

  7、hair

  8、food

  9、flavor

  10、去掉of one

  對(duì)于基礎(chǔ)薄弱的考生,無(wú)論英語(yǔ)一還是英語(yǔ)二,長(zhǎng)難句不會(huì)寫(xiě)但更要注意的是千萬(wàn)別犯一些簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。本來(lái)背誦的長(zhǎng)難句增彩的,如果有簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤會(huì)讓閱卷老師大跌眼鏡的,因此盡量避免簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。除了要保證語(yǔ)法上的正確性,小作文特別需要注意的是開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾的套話(huà),這個(gè)需要大家平時(shí)積累,開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾的套話(huà)一方面能夠保證自己的作文沒(méi)有跑題,另外,這些套話(huà)也是遵循書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作規(guī)范。拋磚引玉,希望大家除了在建議信下功夫,其他書(shū)信格式也都要有所涉獵和積累。

  接下來(lái)需要大家在作文板塊上投入大量時(shí)間,因?yàn)樽魑倪€是比較容易短時(shí)間內(nèi)提高分?jǐn)?shù)的?;A(chǔ)好的可以多整理些屬于自己的好句子;基礎(chǔ)不好的可以訓(xùn)練自己避免犯一些低級(jí)的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,在此基礎(chǔ)上再進(jìn)行句子的潤(rùn)色。祝大家考研路上馬到功成。

  (實(shí)習(xí)編輯:史若陽(yáng))

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